Hi Patrick! I really like your idea, and I thought you conveyed it really well in your pitch. I think the specific numbers you included really helped support the idea, and you have a great closer. Maybe going into more specifics on how investors will make money will help to seal the deal. Good job with the organization of it too!
Hello Patrick! I really enjoyed listening to your pitch. You did a good job catching my attention and speaking clearly. You seemed organized and really put together. My only suggestion is getting into more details.
Hi Patrick!
ReplyDeleteI really like your idea, and I thought you conveyed it really well in your pitch. I think the specific numbers you included really helped support the idea, and you have a great closer. Maybe going into more specifics on how investors will make money will help to seal the deal. Good job with the organization of it too!
Hello Patrick! I really enjoyed listening to your pitch. You did a good job catching my attention and speaking clearly. You seemed organized and really put together. My only suggestion is getting into more details.
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